Can anyone revise these sent. or just check to make sure they sound clear. The WORD that is caps must stay?

5. When my famliy gathers around the table, my dad always has a QUINTESSENCE wine with his meal.





6. I am against INCEST, withthin famliy members marrying eachother.





7.The way my brother gambles causes me to be ANGST about his spending habits.





P.s The sent. have to be about famliy or self!Can anyone revise these sent. or just check to make sure they sound clear. The WORD that is caps must stay?
Angst is a noun--you would have it, not be it.





Incest sentence--not sure what you need to do, but you're just defining one kind of it. It's also redundant--you say I am against incest, then have a very awkward definition of it.





Quintessance is also a noun:





1. the pure and concentrated essence of a substance.


2. the most perfect embodiment of something.


[Dictionary.com].





That construction makes no sense as it is. You would need to say something like My father thinks Italian chianti is the quintessance of wine.